Rhetorical Analysis

Hey everyone, and welcome back! Today, I'd like to discuss Michelle Alexander's writing style, and go into detail about the rhetorical devices she utilizes in The New Jim Crow and how they enable her to strengthen her argument.

As I mentioned in the introduction, Alexander appeals strongly to logos in her book. She delves deeply into history and does not need to appeal to pathos as much because of the facts she uncovered that speak for themselves. For example, on page 66 of Chapter 2, Alexander says, "The Court long ago acknowledged that effective use of consent searches by the police depends on the ignorance (and powerlessness) of those who are targeted." Despite merely stating a fact, Alexander makes the reader feel guilty, indignant, angry, or all of them at once because of the injustice shown to the "ignorant" and the "powerless" who are frequently exploited in the criminal justice system. So basically, by appealing to logos, the author is appealing to pathos at the same time, which could be confusing but the author makes it work in The New Jim Crow. This reminds me very much of Fast Food Nation, a book primarily comprised of facts and statistics but very powerful in relating its message to the readers and sparking an emotional reaction all the same.

The author uses quite lengthy sentences and often complicated syntax, enabling her to develop and maintain the tone of her book. By weaving so many facts (many of which alarming and capable of triggering the emotions of the reader) into every sentence, one after the other, she is able to drill home the point that the presence of racism in the criminal justice system is as unrelenting and ever-present as the multitudinous negative choices we as a nation have made in the past. They may also serve to slightly overwhelm the reader and create a heightened sense of urgency. For example, in Chapter 2, Alexander says, "The most visible sign of the failed system is the astonishingly large caseloads public defenders routinely carry, making it impossible for them to provide meaningful representation to their clients." This sentence, though jam-packed with information, ends on a negative note that suggests those in need of legal representation are lacking proper assistance because of the mere quantity of cases their public defenders are responsible for. Ending on a negative note after enhancing the reader's understanding of the topic at hand makes the message of the sentence itself more powerful.

Michelle Alexander structures her chapters in an interesting manner. She writes the chapters themselves and then forms sub-sections within them; otherwise, the material would be extremely dense and would not allow for the readers to distinguish where a particular sub-topic ends and another begins. For example, in Chapter 2, she organizes the chapter entitled "The Lockdown" into sub-sections such as "Rules of the Game," "Unreasonable Suspicion," and "Waging War" to organize the main idea of the chapter into specific sections to help the reader better understand the main idea (in this case, the main rundown of the War on Drugs, how it developed, and how it impacted law enforcement and the African-American race today) as a whole.

Thanks so much for reading my second blog post! Hope all my fabulous readers are having as much fun as I am! See you next time!

Comments

  1. Hi Grace!
    I enjoyed reading your analysis of the rhetorical devices in the New Jim Crow. I especially enjoyed the connection you made to Fast Food Nation; it helped me to understand what you meant by the combination of logos and pathos, despite not having read your book. In my blog posts, I have discussed the accessibility that I feel my book, Race by Marc Aronson, has. Is your author's more complicated syntax affecting your understanding of the book in any way? I wonder who her audience is if her writing style is more lengthy and complicated. Lastly, it was interesting to read about how your book is divided into sub-sections, since my book is formatted very similarly. Aronson, the author of Race, typically begins each sub-section with an italicized story and makes some unusual analogies between modern day and historical events. I find it helpful for non-fiction to be broken up in this way. How do you like this format? I'm excited to see what you write about next!

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    1. Thank you Clara! I think that the author's complicated syntax makes for a slower read, but if you take the time to read carefully, understanding is overall not difficult. I have learned a lot from this book, and I feel as though altering the sentence structure in any way would have to result in cutting down on facts, which would take away from the overall message. That's interesting that your book, Race, is formatted similarly to mine! I really like the sub-section format because it allows me to take a breath between sub-topics in certain chapters and think about what I just read. It also is more organizationally and aesthetically appealing.
      Thanks for taking the time to read my blog post!

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your blog post! I think that it's really interesting that the logos in Michelle Alexander's writing also is an appeal to pathos. The fact you quoted does make me feel guilty and angry. I liked the way you explained the mixing of appeals to logos with appeals to pathos because it made it easy to understand. Do the lengthy sentences and complicated syntax make the book hard to read, or does breaking it up into different sections help?

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  3. Nice job on your second post!! I'm excited to learn more about this book through yours and others blog posts. It is interesting to see that your book is mainly appealing to logos because mine has a pretty good balance between logos and pathos, and it's interesting to see that both ways can make an effective argument. I also really liked your connection to Fast Food Nation. Can't wait to read more!!

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  4. You brought up Fast Food Nation. I feel that part of the power of that book was the personal stories that Schlosser included. However, while Alexander has some specific stories, most are more general and detached. Why do you think there is still an emotional impact, and why do you think Alexander doesn't use as many specific cases to develop her points?

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    1. Also, I like the Nixon image, but don't forget to cite it!

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